Marshall's line: I've learned to savor blinks.
Wow. Lovely word choice. Like I said in class "savor" is such an excellent choice. Something weaker like "appreciate" or wordier like "look forward to" would have really taken the punch out of this line. And the line does a nice job conveying the extent of this lack of sleep.
Well done, Marshall.
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